Monday, September 29, 2008

My cinquain poem


I

Caring, friendly

Cares twards animals

Dedication to the World

Me

by Hannah Hoang

I Am Poem

I am

Friends, Family, Life

I care about the environment and animals.

Trust is important to me because I need to know who I can trust.

Generosity is Important to me because I want to be treated nicely

Friend ship is important to me because I don’t want to be lonely

Communication is important but it can get you in trouble

Expressing your feeling out loud is can take the chance away from people but it can help

people understand the question.

The world needs to grow stronger.

We need to bond.

Change is good

This is me.



By: Hannah Hoang

Saturday, September 13, 2008

City of Ember #2

I don't think that lina went to the roof to cause trouble. She just wanted to look around. I don't think that the mayor should't have scolded her beacause curiosity isn't something to be blamed for, it is something to set aside beacause It is not their fault for being curiouse its just who we are. Even the mayor might have gotton in trouble for being t curiouse maybe once or twice so why did he blame her for it.
Once I was walking down the stairs at 6 to 6and then there was a marble on the step. I slipped and Then I rolled down the stairs. Then a popular kid named Sayers started laughing and soon everybody started laughing. Even though the staff told them to stop and I was bruised they still laughed. I started to tear and that made them laugh even more. The next day everyone was like hey crybaby or I think the ground misses you. I was soo sad after that.

Monday, September 8, 2008

City of Ember #1

I think that the city of ember relates to my life because lina always has mischife and curiosity in har charictors voice and I am actually very curoise because it bothers me if i don't know something because then I have to do so much to find out what I'm looking for and that can get me in trouble. Doon also relates to me because he always seems worried and I worry beacause I like to think of the negitives I am very pesimistic some times when I see something bad happen to someone I picture it happining to me. Also If I have a bad dream I imagine it to come alive and for my life to be like that nightmare . I always look for the down fall. I really like lina beacause she is the opposite of me but in a good way. she always thinks of the good things witch to me I think of the good things.